What ifyou went to sleep as usual in 2004 – and woke up in 1934?

What if – you had vital knowledge about the forthcoming Second World War, and could prove that you came from the future?

What could you do to affect British policy, strategy, tactics and equipment?

How might the course of the conflict be changed?

And what if there was another throwback from the future – and he was working for the enemy?

The novel follows the story of these two 'throwbacks' as they pit their wits against each other. A very different Second World War rages across Europe, the Mediterranean, Russia, the North Atlantic and the Pacific, until its shocking conclusion.

 

This book may be purchased online, or in paperback from the publisher, amazon.co.uk or amazon.com

Details and purchasing arrangements are available on the publishers' website HERE

Read the first chapter HERE

 

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Read Paul Adkins' spinoff story - Foresight America - HERE

 

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Reviews

 

Amended 22 March 2008 

 

General comment

It's fascinating (and also somewhat nerve-wracking) for an author to read what reviewers have to say about a novel. What is most marked in the reviews below is the huge diversity of opinion about The Foresight War, with ratings on the amazon.co.uk website ranging from one to five stars. On the good side, at least the book is provoking a lot of debate, and the average score is quite high. The most substantial criticism is the lack of characterisation. This is fair comment, and results from the fact that  the book was written to explore ideas about WW2 which I put in the form of a novel as an appropriate way of presenting them.  I also take refuge in the observation by popular British SF writer Bob Shaw, who defended the relative lack of characterisation in most science fiction as being appropriate for the genre, that "The idea can assume the role of a character". The Foresight War is intensely plot-driven with the principal role of the characters being to carry the plot forward, rather than the plot being the framework for exploring the characters, as is the case with more conventional literature. In my opinion, too much characterisation could have distracted from the plot and slowed down the action. However, readers can judge that for themselves, and I take comfort from the fact that most reviewers clearly enjoyed The Foresight War - and that's primarily what I published it to achieve.

 

Only brief extracts from the reviews are included here, due to copyright concerns. Follow the links to read the complete reviews.

 

WARNING: some of the content of the following reviews includes 'spoilers' which reveal plot detail – these sections are shown in red!

 

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From William Garthright of the 'Classic Science Fiction' site HERE

 

I just this minute finished "The Foresight War" (2004) by Tony Williams, and I must say that I loved it. I had a hard time putting it down....

This is plot-driven science fiction, and my usual preference is for character-driven SF. But I'm not a fanatic about it, and I must admit that this sort of alternate history is right up my alley. I'm fascinated by the whole idea. And although characterization is not the focus of this book, what characterization there is here is spot on. I've read other plot-driven alternate history, such as "1901" by Robert Conroy or "A Damned Fine War" by Bill Yenne, in which the characterization is so poor that it detracts from the story. That's not the case here. The characterization is excellent, it's just not the main focus of the book. As you can probably tell, I was very impressed....

 

I highly recommend "The Foresight War," at least if you're interested in World War II and/or alternate history.
 

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From Christopher Nuttall of the 'Changing the Times' alternate history website HERE

This book is well written and an easy read.  The combat scenes are good and the effects well described.  The ending is shocking and realistic under the circumstances.

Right, that’s the basics.  Everything under this is discussion of the plot and includes spoilers.  If you don’t want it spoilt, go away.

The book has a wealth of technical and strategic detail.  The author clearly knows his field and it shows, from small personnel weapons to radar.  Just a few hints would have helped the defenders of Britain enormously, while the laptop must have seemed like a gift from God.  Williams avoids the utterly impossible clinch of the British duplicating the laptop.....

The greatest problem with the book is that the British have very limited resources at that point in time.....

The other slight problem is a throwaway line in which the Japanese navy is effectively destroyed by the Americans.  That is somewhat unrealistic.....

On the whole, this is a very good book and deserves to be far wider known.

 

[Author's comment: some fair points here, with only a couple of counterpoints:

1. The British rearmament plans are based on remaining approximately within the historical financial constraints; it's a question of spending the money on better equipment rather than more of it.

2. The Japanese fleet which ran into the US fleet had already been involved in a long, hard engagement, had suffered considerable damage (especially to carriers) and would have been low on ammo. It is not unreasonable to expect that a fresh US fleet would have won such an encounter.]

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From Nathan Brazil at The SF Site HERE

 

 A piece of advice often given to first time authors is, write what you know. Anthony G. Williams has followed this to the letter. The Foresight War is his first novel, although he has previously published several factual works as a military technology historian. Using his vast knowledge of the events and weaponry used during WWII, he projects an alternate stream of events, where the flow of history is changed by two men. They are Don Erlang and Professor Konrad Herrman, who are both accidental time travellers from 2004, that wake up one morning to find themselves in 1934. Herrman in Germany and Erlang in England. Both men are military historians, who adapt quickly to their new circumstances, and independently set out to change history as they knew it.....

Famous names from WWII crop up as regular characters, including main players Churchill, Hitler, and Rommel. Others, such as Roosevelt and Stalin, are spoken about but not seen in person. The historical cast stay true to character, just as history has portrayed them....What follows is a fast paced, easy to read story, heavy with technical detail and light on dialogue. Event after event shows the result of the time travellers' influence on their leaders. The author has a precise, factually biased style of writing that explains what's necessary, but rarely goes more than a few steps beyond. The impression given, perhaps intentionally, is of a series of snapshots scattered between the larger, set piece encounters with alternate history....

The one serious flaw is a lack of characterisation, in particular with Erlang and Herrman, the time travellers. Neither of them ever question how they came to slip through time, if there might be a way back, or what has become of the future without them....

In summary, The Foresight War is a highly plausible alternate take on history, which reads more like an alternate historical record, than a story set in another timeline.

 

[Author's comment: fair enough – see my General comment at the start about the characterisation issue.]

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From Oyaguy in LiVEJOURNAL Topfive reviews HERE

 

In total, a rather realistic, aside from the obvious, "what if" scenario of WWII, that clearly shows the author's bias towards the technical and political aspects of his story, as opposed to character. Probably an interesting read for the initiated but will definitely be a snore for the average history layman. Which equates to most of the population of the world.  7/10.

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Customer Reviews from Amazon.co.uk:

 

Average Customer Review (17 reviews):

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            A Great Idea - that deserves more respect., 8 Jan 2008

            Mr. Richard I. Carling (Cambridge, UK)

All writing should be applauded for the effort, but with even more effort this idea could have been a great work of fiction.

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            A rather poor "alternative history" novel, 27 Jul 2007

            Reviewer: George (Thessaloniki, - Greece)

            [Author's comment: Oh well, you can't please everybody...]
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            Such a Brilliance for a first Book, 6 Jul 2007

            Reviewer: P Walker "Caveboy 101" (South Cave ,England)

BUY THIS BOOK. Its worth it cause I've read it once and am starting again and this will not be the last time, it is simply that good.

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            Started rereading immediately!, 26 Jun 2007

            Reviewer: Richard D. Coates (UK)

As a wargamer and a fan of alternative history fiction I loved this book....In my opinion, this story cries out for a film - or a TV series

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            Fantastic rollercoaster of a British victory, 2 April 2007

            Reviewer: Mrs. C. N. Morton "Claire Morton" (Northumberland, England)
Wonderful, savage imagery with which, I presume, the author meant to draw direct parallels with our time.

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            What a great story!!!!!! , 31 Jan 2007

               Reviewer: SJ SMART "Smartie" (York, England)
If you have ever asked yourself what would World War two had been like if Britain was better prepared and had listen to various pre war experts. If it had concentrated on building a good tank, aircraft carriers to escort convoys and project power and fighters before the war, and then be able to face Hitler's blitzkreig on equal terms, then this is the book for you!
Buy this book, tell your friends, its great!!

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         unputdownable, 5 Jan 2007

            Reviewer: Kentishman (Kent, UK)

I'm a fan of alternate history books and with the exception of a couple of flaws at the beginning and end, this was a very good read.
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            A jolly romp through WWII, 2 Nov 2006

               Reviewer: Mr. C. Bennett

I liked this book, it was very readable and the action starts early on. It contains lots of interesting ideas about how things could have turned out differently....

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            Literally could not put this book down..., 4 Aug 2006
            Reviewer: Geoff Bennett (Nottingham, England)  

I know it's a cliche, but it's true. I have missed two deadlines for a work project because of this book!
Absolutely fascinating. Well researched and fairly well written....
If you read and loved Tom Clancy's "Red Storm Rising", then you absolutely must read this book.

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        A Very British War..., 12 Jun 2006
        Reviewer: D.P.Evans (London)

...and no bad thing! I enjoyed this, its a densely-packed fast-paced novel that charts on the progress of an alternate WWII where both Britain and Germany get the chance to correct some of their 'mistakes' in advance.....
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       Believable and engaging! 13 May 2006

         Reviewer: Oleg Volk (Nashville, TN USA)

Anthony Williams writes an excellent what-if....

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          A good idea, poorly executed. 18 April 2006

          Reviewer: A. Bailey (London UK)

The premise is excellent....

However there are major problems with the story.
1. The German side is handicapped by their advisor's moral scruples...
2. Many alternative scenarios are explored only as far as they get rejected by the governments in question...
 

[Author's comment: I was concerned that the German 'throwback' should be perceived as a reasonably sympathetic character, whose dilemma modern readers could at least understand. Had I made him a hard-line Nazi the novel would, in my opinion, have suffered. As far as the alternative plots are concerned, of course there is a huge range of possible scenarios which could have been devised from  the novel's starting point, but I followed what seemed to me the most feasible outcome, given the importance for obvious plot reasons of sticking close to historical events for as long as possible.]

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           Well-written, clever and compelling, 11 April 2006

            Reviewer: steven (Twickenham, Middlesex UK)

It's not over-dramatic but it has a great deal of action and suspense. The battle scenes are very well written - not at a detailed blood-and-guts level - but as military historical narrative....

Highly recommended.

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           Disappointingly contrived, 18 March 2006

         Reviewer: Mark Klobas (Tempe, AZ)

The book itself is constructed on a series of contrivances. The first and most central one is the transportation of two historians living in the year 2004 back seventy years into the past – an event that serves as little more than a device for achieving Williams's main goal, which is to re-fight the Second World War using updated weapons and tactics. This is where Williams shines, using his knowledge as a military historian to envision a war re-waged based on the lessons it provided. His ideas in this respect are both intriguing and plausible, posing some interesting answers and setting the stage for some exciting clashes.

The other elements of the novel, however, are sadly lacking. Williams's characters are as contrived as the premise, lacking any real depth or distinct personalities.....

 

[Author's comment: see my introductory General comment on the characterisation issue.]

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        Very well written, 17 Mar 2006

         Reviewer: "cohagan10"

I loved this book...

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        Buy this book, January 16, 2006

         Reviewer: Barry Curran from Edinburgh

This book is a real page turner....

The great thing about this book is that is one which places Britain at the centre of events and, therefore, is must read for British readers who enjoy reading alternative histories....

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        Foresight War, August 30, 2005

         Reviewer: Andrew Reid-Jones from Cardiff, South Glamorgan United Kingdom

Picked it up once, put it down only once till I finished it.

 

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Customer Reviews From Amazon.com:

 

 Average Customer Review (7 reviews):

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Down to Earth and believable, March 3, 2008

Reviewer: Anandasubramanian C. Pranat

  Detailed, yet completely plausible outcomes.

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            Disappointingly contrived, December 13, 2007

            Reviewer: Mark Klobas (Tempe, AZ)

            [Author's comment: this is just a duplicate of the review on amazon.co.uk - of 18 March 2006!]

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  Brilliantly thought out, solidly researched, October 17, 2007

            Reviewer: A. L. Jones (Billings, MT United States)

  Anyone curious about World War II would enjoy the book, the more you know the more impressive and intriguing the book is.

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        Just plain cool, April 25, 2005

        Reviewer: Tark Mwain "(tm)" (Mo town)

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        A Nice Little Book, March 25, 2005

        Reviewer: Gregory Paul Adkins "Stickler" (Jeddah, Saudi Arabia)

...A silly premise of course, but I really enjoy this sort of thing.
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        A good read, February 9, 2005

        Reviewer: Nicholas Sumner (Canada)

I am a little bit wary of time travel scenarios but I found The Foresight War to be a satisfying read and a large and complicated plot is deftly handled, the narrative is well paced, there are surprising plot turns and the book is sufficiently gripping to be read at one sitting, there is also a great deal of detail and some laugh out loud humour....

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        Close, but no Cigar, January 5, 2005

        Reviewer: James K. Brooks "jkbrooks85" (Blacksburg, Virginia United States)

Some howlers ... the author has Barbarossa starting in May and repeats
the urban legend about how the Balkan campaign was the reason for the
delay, not the spring rains as we all know to be the case.

It seems as if he has also ignored the materiel and logistics
constraints of the pre-war German economy...

He also has them producing hundreds of U-Boats without the Brits
noticing ...


And, for example, he has a British AEW warned USAAC decimate the
Japanese attack on Pearl Harbour in P-40's....

And Chamberlain resigns in favour of Churchill on the say so of the
uptimer, but no hint that he resigned as much because he was dying of
stomach cancer....

 

[Authors comment: a few points here!

 1. Barbarossa: the criticism is invalid, the attack in the novel starts on 1st of June, the original target date of May 15th having been "delayed by a fortnight by the consequences of a late spring thaw after a severe winter, exacerbated by exceptionally wet weather, which had combined to cause swollen rivers and flooded plains. Even now some of OKH had argued for a further delay to ensure that conditions were suitable for the Panzers, but Hitler would wait no longer." And (a comment by Erlang about what happened in his time): "Hitler originally intended to attack in May, but was deflected until late June by the Balkans campaign, which in my time went on for much longer."

 2. German resources: as with the British developments, the main changes to the German rearmament come from different choices; however, there was capacity for more war production as was clearly demonstrated by the fact that production rose late in the war even under heavy Allied bombing. The 20 Panzer Divisions (with 4,000 tanks) in the novel were only available in time for the start of Barbarossa, at which time Germany historically attacked with 3,600 tanks.

 3. U-boat production: the British become aware of the German submarine developments in early 1938 (see end of Chapter 1)

 4. Pearl Harbor: the degree to which the US defences might have disrupted the Japanese attack, given enough warning to get their fighters armed and in the air, has been the subject of much debate on discussion forums, with no consensus being reached. In the novel, they partly disrupt the attack, which seems a reasonable compromise, so I don't accept this criticism is valid.

 5. Chamberlain's illness: it isn't particularly relevant why he resigned historically; he was given enough reason to do so by Erlang!]

 

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